One of the most important elements in computer games is immersion: you feel like embedded into the world. When immersion breaks, you are dislocated. That is how I felt with this story, describing a heroine’s quest to destroy an endboss, the „Kaiju maximus“: The narrative flow was broken by meta level rule discussions.
The author tried to achieve an inversion of typical computer game settings, with male heroes and pretty girls. Here, we don’t have any name – not the female hero, nor her husband or her children.
Better play the game instead of reading this. Or: Read „Ready, Player One“.